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sleepless Now is three o'clock in the morning ,and I still keep awake .recently I am very busy on my work ,and yesterday afternoon I finally got finish it .And today will be my last day in this company ,I want to have a different life ,so I quit .Staying at one company for six years ,I was tired of this job ,and I need some fresh air .Keeping alive is not a easy thing .I am always afraid of days goes by like a dead lake.LIfe should go like a stream ,a river ,or other flowing thing,but not a lake .So keep going on for a better life ,a better me .

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Sleepless

It is now three o'clock in the morning, and I still keep awake. Recently I have been very busy with my work, and yesterday afternoon I finally got finished with it. And Today will be my last day in this company.  I want to have a different life, so I quit. Staying at one company for six years, I was tired of this job and I need some fresh air. Keeping alive is not a easy thing. I am always afraid of days that go by like a dead lake. Life should go like a stream, a river, or other flowing thing, but not a lake. So I keep going on for a better life, a better me.

 

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