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caro
Be concentrated More and more people use cell phone,and spend a lot of time on it. It seems that people rely on it all the time, including walking,eating and even dating with friends or family.So we can't be concentrated on the person we talk to,keep eyes contact and show him respect.Maybe we should put away the cell phone when we meet other people ,like joining the party or gathering with family,and have a good talk with them.

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I think that you make a good point! It would be really great if people put away their phones at parties. Also, instead of 'concentrate on someone' you can say 'give our full attention to someone', eg. 'Because of this, we can't give our full attention to the person we are talking to' :)
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Concentrate

More and more people spend a lot of time on their cell phones. It seems that people rely on it all the time, including while walking, eating and even going out with friends or family. Because of this, we can't concentrate on the person we are talking to, keep eye-contact or show him respect. Maybe we should put away our cell phone when we meet other people, like at a party or gathering with family, and have a good talk with them instead.

 

 

 

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Be concentrated present ["being present" is a phrase to indicate that you are giving your full attention to the current moment, so I think it captures your meaning.]

More and more people use cell phones , and spend a lot of time on it them. It seems that people rely on it them all the time, including while walking, eating, and even dating going out [dating = a going out with someone you have a romantic interest in.] with friends or family. So we can't be concentrated concentrate on the person we talk to, keep eyes contact, and show him respect. Maybe we should put away the our cell phones [you wrote "we," plural, so you are talking about multiple cell phones, not just one.] when we meet other people, like when we joining the a party or family gathering with family, and have a good talk with them.

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