brief opening description of my CV
"I am seeking internship opportunities in financial sectors that deals with private equity investments, with particular regard to leveraged and structured finance, as my main target for the future is to start a career and gain ever more expertise in an international context within the corporate finance industry."
I am Interested in knowing possible grammar and lexical mistakes, and if someone is willing to give me a better reformulation of one or more sentence, that will be well accepted!
Thanks in advance to eveyone
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Brief opening description of my CV
"I am seeking internship opportunities in financial sectors that deals with private equity investments, with particular regard to leveraged and structured finance, as my main target for the future is to start a career and gain ever more expertise in an international context within the corporate finance industry."
I am interested in knowing my possible grammar and lexical mistakes, and if someone is willing to correct my note give me a better reformulation of one or more sentence, I will be grateful that will be well accepted!
Thanks in advance to eveyone.
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