Autumn

In my country,Spain, we are in the middle of autumn (no need to capitalize "autumn"). I thought that I liked it but now realize that I don´t really like it, I and would rather prefer it be  the spring .
We arrive in autumn we come from after the summer that which   it is hot, relaxing, bright the season of for the senses. and the Autumn is the season marking the transition for the to winter, a season that I don´t like, rather I hate. it .
You begin to become  unpleasant with as the temperature drops, especially if you are working on the computer or reading and suddenly realize that you don´t know and you are freezing, like me I did 20 minutes ago. that I must had to turn on the heating, we have although the temperature was 18º which is strange. 
And (remember not to begin a sentence with "and" or "but") You also have to keep putting on more go getting clothes in at different times of the day. Now I´m going to have a drink with friends and I must take the time to decide that what I must wear.
But However, the worst thing it is that at the end of October although it's still is autumn at the end of October, the winter wil be yet, for the first of November is always marks the beginning of the really cold temperatures.
Best regards
Celia

I agree with you Celia, I also hate winter!!

Autumn

In my country, Spain, we are currently in the middle of Autumn. I thought that I liked it, but it turns out that I prefer the Spring.

In Autumn we come from the Summer, which is hot, relaxing, bright, and is the season of the sense. Autumn is the season the transition to Winter, a season that I don´t like at all.  

It's quite easy to feel unpleasant with the sudden temperature change, especially if you are working on computer or reading. Suddenly you will realize you are freezing, like me 20 minutes ago, and that it's time to turn on the heating. It's 18º and I find it quite strange.

 
And you have to get different types of cloth for different times of the day. Now I´m going to have a drink with friends and I need some time decide that I should wear.

But the worse will come at the end of October. Although it will still be Autumn, the first of November is always the beginning of the cold.
Best regards
Celia

Great job Celia! Your main issue is with having too many thoughts in one sentence. It's best to keep only one or two thoughts in the same sentence to avoid "run-on sentences". Keep up the practice!