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first English entry! This is the first time I've written an English entry. I usually wrote entries in Vietnamese. My name is Van. I'm living in Ho Chi Minh city- the biggest, most active and crowded in VN. I am a sophomore of the aviation academy in VN. Now I'm learning Air traffic control, I hope one day I will become a good ATC, then I could direct aircrafts in the sky safely without crashing. An ATC must be good at English, also I want to make the acquaintance of everyone from different countries. I really really desire to speak English without shyness. Thanks for reading <and correct> this entry :) Cám ơn vì đã đọc và góp ý cho mình nhen :D

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first English entry!

This is the first time I've written an English entry. I usually wrote entries in Vietnamese before now.
My name is Van. I'm living in Ho Chi Minh city- the biggest, most active and crowded city in VN. I am a sophomore of the aviation academy in VN. Now I'm learning Air traffic control. I hope one day I will become a good ATC, then I could direct aircrafts in the sky safely without crashing. An ATC must be good at English; also, I want to make the acquaintance of everyone from different countries.
I really really desire to speak English without shyness.
Thanks for reading <and correcting> this entry :)
Cám ơn vì đã đọc và góp ý cho mình nhen :D

Good writing, Van.  Not many mistakes here!
"Aircraft " is the same n both singluar and plural form.

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