10/23 Dialogue

Hello, My teachers!

These days I'm chatting with my foreigner friends to practice my English skills. I think there are a lot of wrong sentences, so, I hope you can correct my mistakes. I'm always thankful to you. By the way, I use lots of short sentences and weird words (such as 'looks gooood') for convenience and emphasis. If they have wrong grammar or they are not-used-expressions, please correct them. Also, there are many Korean words. Please excuse me about it. (It's okay, I've been studying Korean.~)

I always appreciate you, my teacher!

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[JSL] [오후 2:07] Agnese! Have you ever been to other cities in England?? such as London, Manchester?
[Agy] [오후 4:02] Hi, yes I have been to these cities and they are really nice although Manchester is quite cold and windy (exhausted)(haha)
[JSL] [오후 4:37] really???
[JSL] [오후 4:37] How about your city, Telford??
[JSL] [오후 4:37] Is it nice for travelling?
[Agy] [오후 4:39] It's small city and there is not much to see but there is Wrekin mountain which is not really high but it's a nice view from the top (grin)(wow)
[Agy] [오후 4:39] photo
[Agy] [오후 4:40] Then there is touristy place Ironbridge but I haven't been there (haha)
[JSL] [오후 4:44] woww I wanna go there!
[JSL] [오후 4:44] I don't mind whether the place is a small or big city
[JSL] [오후 4:44] I just wanna feel England~~ <--- Haha!! cute!~
[Agy] [오후 4:45] (haha) that's the spirit (haha)
[Agy] [오후 4:46] But it's not easy or cheap to get to my city from London for example
[JSL] [오후 4:47] really? ㅠㅠ
[JSL] [오후 4:47] How about Manchester or Liverfool
[JSL] [오후 4:47] sorry, Liverpool*
[Agy] [오후 4:48] Public transport is really expensive especially if you travel to further places
[Agy] [오후 4:50] Return ticket from Telford to London is £55 which is about ₩93500
[JSL] [오후 4:50] (허걱)
[Agy] [오후 4:51] Yes (serious)
[JSL] [오후 4:51] so expensive~????
[Agy] [오후 4:51] It's very expensive
[JSL] [오후 4:53] Then I have to earn more money(멘붕)
[Agy] [오후 4:56] Yeah, you have to be rich to be tourist here (haha)
[JSL] [오후 6:12] By the way, You woke up early today!
[Agy] [오후 6:14] Yes, I have early classes today
[JSL] [오후 6:17] what are the classes' titles?? (or you could say "what classes do you have?")
[Agy] [오후 6:17] Events
[JSL] [오후 6:18] Events?! What do you learn in that class? I can't imagine what you learn

[Agy] [오후 8:37] We are studying about events types, providers and making our own event which will be charity dinner for elderly people
[JSL] [오후 10:29] Sounds interesting!

와!!! 영어말 정말 잘해요!~ 아주 잘했어요. ^^

Your grammar is the best I've seen so far from many people who are starting to learn English! You don't overuse it and you put it in the right places.^^ Good job.~