My favorite place

Hello! I want to tell you about my favorite place. This is my country house. My family and I like to come to  this cottage. It has two floors. The ground floor has two rooms and a kitchen. The first room is the children's room. It has too many toys. My children like to play with toy cars.
The second room is our bedroom. There is many of my cross-stitch pictures. The second floor is like an attic. There is a lot of old stuff. Our country house is located in a garden with many apple trees, peach trees, apricot trees аnd a little vineyard. Near my cottage is a big lake. We like to swim in it.

Hello Elena,

This sounds like a nice place to escape to. Just a few small mistakes some of which are spelling mistakes.

Hope this helps

Bob