first time on italki!

Hi! i'm Chiara and i'm 23 :)
I live in Modena, Italy, and I work for a famous brand of fashion company because im I graduated in fashion one year ago.
I want to learn english because i need it to work and because next year i wish to move to San Diego, California.
I'm so sorry for my english. I don't study this language at school and now i don't remember anything!
So, please, help me.. :) thanks!

first time on italki!

Hi! i'm Chiara and i'm 23 :)
I live in Modena, Italy, and I work for a famous brand of fashion because im graduated in fashion one year ago.
I want to learn english because i need it tofor work and because next year i wish to move to San Diego, California.
I'm so sorry for my english, i don't didn't study this language at school and now i don't remember anything!
So, please, help me.. :) thanks!

Ciao Chiara,

This is a good start and easily comprehensible for me as a native English speaker.  A few notes:

A famous brand of fashion. This sounds a little strange to my ear.  Suona un po' strano.  Perhaps, "I work for a famous fashion company"

I graduated = mi sono laurata.  In the United States, we don't normally say "I graduated in a field".  You can say "I got my degree in fashion a year ago"  (complimenti, a proposito).

If you are writing anything formal, you will want to capitalize English (not english).  

Mi piace San Diego.  È una bella città.