Cities and Memory
Beyond six rivers and three mountain ranges emerges Zora, a city that who has seen , can not forget once more. But let not because, like other memorable cities, an image out of the ordinary in the memory. Zora has the ability to remain in the memory point by point, in the succession of its streets, and the house across the street, and the doors and windows of the houses, although there isn´t in them beauties or particular quirks . Its secret is the way the slides view figures that occur as a musical score where you can not change a note.
The man who knows by heart as Zora, at night, when you can not sleep, imagine walking through its streets and remember the order in which the copper clock occur, the awning striped barber pole, the source of nine pipes, glass tower astronomer, as the seller of watermelons, the height of the hermit and the lion, the Turkish bath, the coffee shop, the shortcut leading to the port.
This city is not cleared of the mind is like a frame or a grid in boxes everyone can have the things you want to remember: names of famous men, virtues, numbers, vegetable and mineral classifications, dates of battles, constellations, parts of speech. Between each idea and each point of the itinerary you may establish a bond of affinity or contrast to serve as a memory snapshot call. So the wisest men in the world are those who know Zora of memory.
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Cities and Memory
Beyond six rivers and three mountain ranges emerges Zora, a city that who has seen , can not forget once more.
Beyond six rivers and three mountain ranges emerges Zora, a city that once seen, cannot be forgotten anymore.
But let not because, like other memorable cities, an image out of the ordinary in the memory.
(esto no lo entiendo, pero si lo escribes en español, lo traduzco)
Zora has the ability to remain in the your memory point by point:, in with the succession of its streets, and the house across the street, and the doors and windows of the houses,---although there isn´t in them a specific beauty or beauties particular quirks.
en español se puede decir, queda en la memoria, que se supone que se traduce a, stays in the memory; pero en inglés, suena muy raro decir, stays in the memory; más común decir, stays in your memory, queda en tu memoria, porque en inglés, your memory, se refiere a la memoria de las personas. Por ejemplo, si tú vas a una ciudad muy bella, en español, puedes decir, es una ciudad tan bella que se queda en la memoria. En inglés sería, It is such a beautiful city, that it stays in your memory. Nunca se dice, that it stays in THE memory.
Its secret is the way the slides view figures that occur as a musical score where you can not change a note.
The man who knows Zora by heart as Zora, at night, when you can not sleep, imagine walking through its streets and remember the order in which the copper clock occur, the awning striped barber pole, the source of nine pipes, glass tower astronomer, as the seller of watermelons, the height of the hermit and the lion, the Turkish bath, the coffee shop, the shortcut leading to the port.
This city is can not be cleared of from the mind is like a frame or a grid in boxes everyone can have the things you want to remember: names of famous men, virtues, numbers, vegetable and mineral classifications, dates of battles, constellations, parts of speech. Between each idea and each point of the itinerary you may establish a bond of affinity or contrast to serve as a memory snapshot call.
So the wisest men in the world are those who know Zora by of memory.
Lo siento mucho, intenté de corregir tu texto, pero lo que está en amarillo, pues no se entiende muy bien. Corrige lo que pude; si lo quieres escribir en español lo que está en amarillo, lo puedo traducir.
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