Introducing Myself

Hello everyone!

My name is Mariana. I am 22 years old and I’m from Brazil. I’m looking forward to learn English and Spanish. Learning Korean will also be my interest.

I’m finishing college this year and I’m already working at my field of studies as a Software Developer. Overall, English is mandatory for reading technical documents.However, good communication skills and writing are totally different. 
I love the Spanish language  and I have some close friends living in some Spanish-speaking countries, so I’d like to speak with them better and visit those places where they live soon as well.

Korean language is my new love. I’m a huge fan of Asian Culture.Nowadays, I’m trying to learn Korean because I’m very fond of k-dramas and K-music.Therefore, I’d like to watch and listen to those without subtitles and these sort of things. Also, I’m a great admirer of Samsung and LG brands and like the fact that they work with innovative technologies.

I have to improve my English because I want to work better in some Open Source communities as well. Good communication skills will help me be more participative in some projects. It will also make way for a better job, for example: a translator.

Introducing me

Hello everyone!

My name is Mariana, 22 years old and I’m from Brazil. I’m looking forward to learning English and Spanish. Korean is welcome as well.

I’m finishing college this year and I’m already working in my field of study  as a Software Developer. Overall, English is mandatory for reading technical documents, however, good communication skills and writing are also essential.
I love Spanish and I have some close friends living in some Spanish-speaking countries, so I’d like to speak better with them  and visit these places where they live soon as well.

Korean is my new love. I’m a huge Asian culture fan, nowadays, I’m trying to learn Korean because I’m very fond of k-dramas and K-music, therefore I’d like to watch and listen to them without subtitles and these sort of things. Also, I’m a great admirer of Samsung and LG and how they work with technology.

I have to improve my English because I want to work better in some Open Source communities as well. Good communication skills will help me be more participative in some projects, also help me get a better job such as translating documentations and stuff.

Hello Mariana,

Nice text with just a few small problems, in the first part it is a fixed frame "To look forward to + verb-ing". This is one of the very few occasions that to is not followed by a verb in infinitive form.

Hope this helps

Bob