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Revision A letter for my future mom Dear Mom: How are you? Since I entered college, I have not seen you for a long time. So far, I have thought that college life is like a dream, which I can’t wake up from. There was a time that I longed to return to middle school, because I can’t adapt to the new environment. In middle school, I always got along well with classmates, and spent much time together with teachers. But sometimes, I was not free and casual for tests. How bittersweet those days in middle school are! Nowadays, everything has been changed, but the one constant is that the first subject I study is still English. At middle school, hard work is still not the whole story. The top students always make plans to study. Therefore, as the lower-scoring student I am, I am going to make plans of my own. First of all, it is universally acknowledged that time is wealth. Top students always make the most of every moment that they can grasp to study. I have a lot of spare time at college, which will be used to recite vocabulary and read English essays by me. From now on, my schedule will be abundant. Second of all, it is of great necessity to me to master various vocabulary words, so that we can make sense of some some essays completely. Also, I will study Amanda so I can stick a vocabulary list by my bed and learn a new word before sleeping. Third of all, there is no denying that public resources such as the internet and libraries are of the best assistance. Consequently, the library will be one of my favourite places. Also, I do hope I will obtain some useful information. Last but not least, interest is indispensable for learning English. Without interest in English, I could not have concentrated on learning English. So I will cultivate interest in English by watching English movies and listening to English songs. I believe my vocabulary will be enlarged. All in all, I will follow these plans to learn English. First, I'll use my time wisely for a better output. Then, I'll study my vocabulary vigorously. Lastly, I will use the plentiful resources available to me. So, I do believe the best future lies in my actions. Your son

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There was a time when I longed to return to middle school, because I can’t adapt to the new environment.

In middle school, hard work is still not the whole story.
Third of all, there is no denying that public resources like as the internet and libraries are of the best assistance.

Lastly, I will the great number of resources available to me.

Good job! "That" usually refers to objects, "when" is less awkward, as you are talking about time. "At" isn't wrong, but "in" is better in that context. "In" implys the period of when you where going to middle school. The fourth sentence is somewhat awkward. I would write it "There are plenty of resources which I can use."

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