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A letter for my future Mom Dear mom: How are you? Since I enter college, I have not seen you for a long time. By far,I have a thought that college life like a dream,which I can not wake up from. There is a time that I long to return to middle school, because I can not adapt to the new environment. In middle school, I always got along well with classmates, and spent much time together with teachers. But sometimes, I was not free and casual for the examination. How bittersweet those days in middle school are! Nowadays, everything has been changed, but the constant one that the first subject I should study is still English. As middle school, hard work is not still the whole story. The top students always make plans for study. Therefore, lower-scoring student as I am, I am going to make plans of my own. First, it is universally acknowledged that the time is wealth. Top students always make the most of every moment that they can grasp to study. I have a lot of spare time at college, which will be used to recite vocabularies, read English essays by me. From now on, my schedule will be abundant. Second, it of great necessity for me to master various vocabularies, so that we can make sense of some some essays completely. Also, I will study Amanda to stick a vocabulary list on bedside and learned a new word before sleeping. Third, there is no denying that the public resources such as the internet and library are the best assistance. Consequently, the library will be a favourite place haunt for me. Also, I do hope I will obtain some useful information. Last but not least, interest is indispensable to learning English. Without interest in English, I could not have concentrate on learning English. So I will cultivate interest in English by watching English movies,listening English songs. I believe I will accumulate adequate vocabularies. All in all, I will follow these plans to learning English, and I do believe the best future lies in my action. May god bless me succeed in English! Yours son

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A letter for my future mom

Dear Mom:
How are you? Since I entered college, I have not seen you for a long time.
So far, I have thought that college life is like a dream,which I can not wake up from. There was a time that I longed to return to middle school, because I can not adapt to the new environment. In middle school, I always got along well with classmates, and spent much time together with teachers. But sometimes, I was not free and casual for tests. How bittersweet those days in middle school are!
Nowadays, everything has been changed, but the one constant is that the first subject I study is still English. At middle school, hard work is still not the whole story. The top students always make plans to study. Therefore, as the lower-scoring student I am, I am going to make plans of my own.
First of all, it is universally acknowledged that time is wealth. Top students always make the most of every moment that they can grasp to study. I have a lot of spare time at college, which will be used to recite vocabulary and read English essays by me. From now on, my schedule will be abundant. (not a good word to use there)
Second of all, it is of great necessity to me to master various vocabulary words, so that we (who is we? Is it you and your mother? It's a little confusing) can make sense of some some essays completely. Also, I will study Amanda (what? Is that the name of the textbook? If it is, then you can say, "I will study Amanda so I can stick a vocabulary list by my bed and learn a new word before sleeping) to stick a vocabulary list by my bed and learn a new word before sleeping.
Third of all, there is no denying that public resources such as the internet and libraries are of the best assistance. Consequently, the library will be one of my favourite places. Also, I do hope I will obtain some useful information.
Last but not least, interest is indispensable for learning English. Without interest in English, I could not have concentrated on learning English. So I will cultivate interest in English by watching English movies and listening to English songs. I believe I will accumulate an adequate vocabulary. 
All in all, I will follow these plans to learn English, and I do believe the best future lies in my actions. May God bless me to succeed in English!
Your son

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