My Uncle's Neglect

I've said it before but no one wants to listen to me. My uncle should be careful with his pets. Indeed, he must to pay attention when he leaves the window opened. It was obvious that someday the bird would fly out through the window. I believe that finding the bird after two days, will be enough for him to learn something. Fortunately he found the bird in time. I heard that it seemed to be malnourished like it hadn’t eaten for a week.

Hello Marco,

People should always take care with animals in the house. I can understand all of the story. There are a few problems with choice of tense and a few other minor problems. Modal verbs (like must) are only followed by an infinitive verb form - no 'to'. If 'listen to' is better than hear as it implies focus.

Hope this helps

Bob