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Cooking with Rachel Khoo (correct please!)
The season of programme that I am going to talk about is “The Little Paris Kitchen: Cooking with Rachel Khoo”.
The program that I am talking about = enough
This is a television cookery program presents by the English chef Rachel Khoo, who doing traditional French cooking in her tiny kitchen in Paris.
cooking, who is doing
One thing that get me surprised is that Rachel cooks in a minuscule kitchen and transforms her apartment in a two-cover traditional French restaurant.
got me
It was the first time that I see this concept of cook and exclusives restaurants in flat, [in other tv programs of cooking the usually is see a famous chef cooking in tv set but no in their houses].
cooking, and restaurants in an apartment => (better) of cooking in a restaurant inside an apartment or flat
In other... (Make a new sentence here) we usually see, but not
And other chance is the capacity who has Rachel for organization this space and who can cook much number of classic French dishes in these conditions.
Reformulate completely (it makes no sense) => perhaps => And what impresses me is the capacity that Rachel has to organize the space and cook a high number of .......
Without more space it would be impossible for me to cook there.
= ok :)
And other thing that was different than so many other cooking programmes is the relation with the type of food.
The sentence grammar is messed up - > I am not sure what you want to say.
Rachel is not Parisian but she cooks french food, this point shows you and other vision of the dishes and can ask some question that I am wondering about like a foreigner.
Reformulate completely. It makes no sense
Remaining that Rachel challenge for local food, it means like some times you can believe you aren’t watching a cooking show you rather watch a travel program and discover each corners of Paris city.
Please make your sentences shorter and less confusing, so as not to lose meaning.
Definitely if you wan’t to discover a different gastronomy of another culture at same time than learn to cook some of this recipes, this is your programme.
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