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My first note Hi my name is Brayan and I'm from brazil. I lives in Rio de janeiro and today was a very hot day. I had to use a ar conditioner all day. We aren't even at the summer yet. It's a shame that I can't went to the beach because of my work. Today was a perfect day to do that. I really want to visit places where the weather is cooler. I wish someday to see snow too and practice snowboard .

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My first note

 

Hi my name is Brayan and I'm from Brazil. I lives in Rio de Janeiro and today was a very hot day. I had to use an air conditioner all day. We aren't even at the summer yet. (or, "It isn't even summer yet.")

It's a shame that I can't went go to the beach because of my work. Today was a perfect day to do that.

I really want to visit places where the weather is cooler. I wish someday to see snow too and practice snowboarding.

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Very nice, Brayan! I wish I could go to the beach now!

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