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Soccer qualifying round (Colombia) Well the first season has passed and many people in Colombia are worry about the performance of the soccer team (I am not). Almost every time that there is a Colombia soccer game we gather at my grandmother´s house. My uncles, cousins, brothers everyone is in the house ready for the game. Colombia played two games, the first one was against Perú. It was a very close game because Perú is a good team but finally Colombia won 2-0. I think that Colombia team did not play well and the score was too big and It was not fair (It is my humble opinion). The second game was against Uruguay. Before the game I was very thoughtful and I thought that Colombia would lose. My family is very fan about soccer and they get crazy with a Colombia´s game. So they got very upset when I said that colombia would lose (jajajaja). So the game started and the first half was a very close game but in the second half it was different, Uruguay dominated the game and beat Colombia, the final score was 3-0. Some people of my family (specially the women) were very sad because the score. But in my opnion this is an opportunity to Colombia´s team because they need to improve their game and their performance. I told them that this is only the beginnig and sometime you have to loose for win (and it is just game).

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Soccer qualifying round (Colombia)

Well the first season has passed and many people in Colombia are worried about the performance of the (our) soccer team (I am not). Almost every time that there is a Colombia soccer game, we gather at my grandmother´s house. My uncles, cousins, brothers, everyone is in the house ready for the game.

Colombia played two games, the first one was against Perú. It was a very close game because Perú is a good team, but finally Colombia won 2-0. I think that the Colombian team did not play well and the score was too high and it was not fair (It is my humble opinion).

The second game was against Uruguay. Before the game, I was very thoughtful (pensive) and I thought that Colombia would lose. My family are very big fans of about soccer (or my family are very fanatical about soccer) and they get crazy with a Colombian´s game. So they got very upset when I said that colombia would lose (jajajaja).

So the game started and the first half was a very close game, but in the second half it was different, Uruguay dominated the game and beat Colombia, the final score was 3-0. Some people in my family (especially the women) were very sad because of the score. But in my opnion this is an opportunity for Colombia´s team because they need to improve their game and their performance.

I told them that this is only the beginnig and sometimes you have to loose to win (and it is just a game).

 

Buena suerte a Colombia! Házmelo saber si tienes cualquier preguntas.

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Soccer qualifying round (Colombia)

Well the first season has passed and many people in Colombia are worry about the performance of the soccer team (I am not). Almost every time that there is a Colombia soccer game we gather at my grandmother´s house. My uncles, cousins, brothers everyone is in the house ready for the game.

Colombia played two games, the first one was against Perú. It was a very close game because Perú is a good team but finally Colombia won 2-0. I think that Colombia team did not play well and the score was too big and It was not fair (It is my humble opinion).

The second game was against Uruguay. Before the game I was very thoughtful and I thought that Colombia would lose. My family is very fan about soccer and they get crazy with a Colombia´s game. So they got very upset when I said that colombia would lose (jajajaja).

So the game started and the first half was a very close game but in the second half it was different, Uruguay dominated the game and beat Colombia, the final score was 3-0. Some people of my family (specially the women) were very sad because the score. But in my opnion this is an opportunity to Colombia´s team because they need to improve their game and their performance.

I told them that this is only the beginnig and sometime you have to lose in order to win (and it is just game).

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