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If I Were Given One Day Off If I were given ond day off I would like to have the "luxury" to wander a whole day around with my daughter. I had once experienced a half day taking my daughter to see the doctor and she always asked me when she can be sick again. Oberviously she enjoyed that half day very much so I want to satisfy her. I will let her wake up natuarally and take her time to have breakfirst instead of saying "Hurry up you are gonna be late for school!" Then I will take her to the Olimpic Park and have a walk there hand in hand. We will be having a conversation while eating her fovarite ice cream under the big tree shade. We will be eating out , maybe Italy pizza maybe hamburgs. Then in the afternoon we will go window shopping or watch a funny movie in the cinema eating popcorn. I believe those common pleasure will be the fondest memories to both my daughter and me.

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If I Were Given One Day Off

If I were given one day off, I would like to have the "luxury" to wander around for a whole day around with my daughter. (or: "... I would like to have the "luxury" to have a whole day to wander around with my daughter.")

I had once experienced a half day taking my daughter to see the doctor, and she always asked asks me when she can be sick again. Oberviously Obviously, she enjoyed that half day very much, so I want to satisfy her.

I will let her wake up naturally and take her time to have eating breakfirst breakfast, instead of saying "Hurry up you are gonna be late for school!" Then I will take her to the Olympic Park and have a walk there hand in hand. We will be having a conversation while eating her fovarite favorite ice cream under the shade of a big tree shade. We will be eating out, maybe Italy (Italian) pizza, or maybe hamburgs hamburgers. Then in the afternoon we will go window shopping or watch a funny movie in the cinema while eating popcorn. (大家都知道pizza是从意大利来的,它正确的英文名字简单地叫pizza).


I believe those common pleasures will be the fondest memories to for both my daughter and me. (I believe that these common pleasures will one day be our fondest memories from her childhood.)


没什么大的问题,只需要注意正确的拼写

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