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My last trip: Indonesia One month ago I was preparing my suitcase to go with my friends to Indonesia. We took the flight from Barcelona to Dubai doing a stopover there. We had the opportunity to visit Dubai for one day, and i didn't like it too much, especially for the weather, it was too much hot. After visit Dubai we took another flight to the capital of Indonesia: Jakarta, but we didn't visit the city that day, because we had another flight to Jogjakarta. Jogjakarta is a city located in the middle of Java's island. There we spent a few days visiting the city and its temples.Really is worth visiting. After that, we took a flight to go to Bali island. from there I recommend the north of the island because the south is too touristy. Unlike Java island and most of Indonesian islands in Bali predominates Hinduism as a religion not Islam. After visit Bali we decided to go to Gili islands by boat. We visited 2 of the three paradise islands, swimming in its waters and relaxing in its white sands. Finally our trip was ending and we had to come back to Jakarta to take our flight to Barcelona.That day we could visit the city, but is not worth visiting.

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My last trip: Indonesia

One month ago I was preparing my suitcase to go with my friends to Indonesia. We took the flight from Barcelona to Dubai, doing a stopover there. We had the opportunity to visit Dubai for one day, and I didn't like it too much, especially for the weather. It was too much hot.
After visiting Dubai we took another flight to the capital of Indonesia: Jakarta, but we didn't visit the city that day, because we had another flight to Jogjakarta. Jogjakarta is a city located in the middle of the island of Java's island. There we spent a few days visiting the city and its temples. It really is worth visiting. After that, we took a flight to go to Bali island. From there I recommend the north of the island because the south is too touristy. Unlike Java island and most of Indonesian islands, Hinduism predominates as religion in Bali, predominates Hinduism as a religion not Islam. After visiting Bali we decided to go to Gili islands by boat. We visited 2 of the three paradise islands, swimming in its waters and relaxing in its white sands. Finally our trip was ending and we had to come back to Jakarta to take our flight to Barcelona. That day we could have visited the city, but is not worth visiting.

 

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