About my business test
Dear colleagues,
I'm writing to inform you that our company's computer systerm will be closed next month at 8a.m. This systerm will be closed down for two hours,please save all your work . After the improvements, the systerm will be faster ang more safe than before.
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About my business test
Dear colleagues,
I'm writing to inform you that our company's computer systerm will be closed next month at 8a.m. This system will be closed down for two hours, so please save all your work in advance of this event. After the improvements, the system will be faster and safer than before.
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This is okay but "Will be closed next month at 8 am... "" sounds a little strange because you then say it will be "closed down for two hours" so you really need to state which DAY this will happen. Otherwise your text is good.But I would prefer "safer" to "more safe".
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