why do we need a home?
When the sky rains, we don't want to get wet. When snow falls down, we would play in the snow, but we definitely don't want to stay outside in the freezing temperatures with the snowman we made, especially at night. Speaking of night, we don't want to sleep at a place where all kinds of bugs can freely pass by your side, or worse, they may interested in you. Those are some of the seasons why do we need a home. But home is not just a place where we are living, because I'd rather get soaked in the rain, get my limbs numb in the cold and fight with the annoying bugs during the sleep, with my loved ones rather than lived in a palace alone.
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Why do we need a home?
When it rains, we don't want to get wet. When snow falls down, we would play in the snow, but we definitely don't want to stay outside in the freezing temperatures with the snow man we made, especially at night. Speaking of night, we don't want to sleep at a place where all kinds of bugs can freely pass next to you, or worse, they may interested in you. Those are some of the seasons why do we need a home. But home is not just a place where we are living, because I'd rather get soaked in the rain, get my limbs numb in the cold and fight with the annoying bugs during the sleep, with my loved ones rather than live in a palace alone.
[Quite good. We say 'it rains'. Also 'snow falls down' is redundant, even though the phrase is correct.]
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