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Every day diary in English. the first . Last spring I went to Suwon Heangung; Jungjo great King ordered to build the palace for his deceased father 'Sado prince' and to live his rest life after demise his throne . If you enter the main gate you are able to see a Zelcova is 600 years old. They say the tree has some special spirit and power to protect who ask or pray her for something wish. It's ridiculous. but i think it works a little. I missed the chance though. Today i visited there again to wish the same which might never come true. It could be hard to get it again and I could even forget sometimes it. But i would like to believe the small pray and make it some day soon.

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Last spring I went to Suwon Heangung. Jungjo, A great king, ordered the palace TO BE BUILT for his deceased father, 'Sado prince', and to live IN FOR THE rest OF HIS life after THE demise OF his throne.

If you enter the main gate you are able to see a Zelcova THAT is 600 years old. They say the tree has some special spirit and power to protect THOSE who ask or pray TO her for SOME wish.


It's ridiculous, but I think it works a little. I missed the chance though.
Today I visited there again to wish A same WISH which might never come true.

It could be hard to get it again and I CAN even forget ABOUT IT sometimes.
But I would like to believe THAT small prayER CAN make it HAPPEN some day soon.

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Nice effort! Tip: work on the flow (less choppy sentences).

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