Sometimes I feel lonely

Sometimes I feel lonely, but I don't know why.

 Maybe, its because I have too much free time or I have no one to talk with or maybe , it just the bad weather .

Once I have a good friend , and we would talk about everything with each other and play games after school everyday such as rope skipping and hide-and-seek.

We slept together and went to the each other's house to have a meal , but now I have to go to college in Hebei province and she is studying  fashion design in another city .

I have not meet her for  a long time , and  I don't know whether she is living happily or not.( happy or not)

I miss her a lot : I had the happiest time of my life with her

 I can't find a friend like her any more .
Living alone a long time ,whenever I miss her I always feel lonely and sad. i will remenber her forever
I hope we both happy everyday and live a happiness life

I have been living alone for a long time , and whenever I miss her , I would feel sad and lonely.

I will remember always( forever) , and hope that we will be happy everyday and have a life full of happiness.

Sometimes I feel lonely

Sometimes I feel lonely, I don't know why .maybe I am free or I have no one to take to or just the weather is bad .I once had a good friend ,we talked about everything to each other and we played games such as such as rope skipping and hide-and-seek after school everyday . We slept together and went to the other side's house to have a meal .but now I go to college in hebei province while she is studying clothes-design in another city .i have not met in her a long time I don't know whether she is living happily.i miss her a lot and the happiest time in my life and I can't find a friend like her any more .
Living alone a long time ,whenever I miss her I always feel lonely and sad. i will remenber her forever
I hope we are both happy everyday and live a happy life

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So sad to hear about this! Hopefully you find  a friend as good as her soon!  :)