The Star-dust
If the star stay ten million light-years far from me with dazzling or twinkling or falling,
am I infatuated with their bright light？
I can never remember the sign from others under the sky.
Tired of showing off like the beast, walking like the vulture, [/B]circling like the bee,
I had no breath in a vagarious world, and came to contact with cheat frequently in alonesome world.
No matter how to disguise, I was cheated by myself every time, and told the truth to my sweetheart forever.
What made my kind-hearted girl return to me like an avenger, and she preferred to suffer all over, rather than lower her tired head?
What a darkness night can shroud her fearful heart?
What let her hurt herself intractably?
She is quietly waiting in a lasting night, while what she waited is tomorrow without seeing sunshine.
The tomorrow would occur again and again;
The tomorrow would become monotonous and tasteless;
The tomorrow would devour wilting and old heart like the trap.
Imagination wounded eyes of darkness night like blinding sunlight,
‘cause she is willing to guard the darkness,
but not wish to see the filthy world by opening her eyes, and even not to see how it devours lamentable soul.
No cheating in this world is a big lie; no lie in this world is a pitch-black prison.
To live proudly by cheating herself, to prove own happiness by gathering
arguments from every corner.
She just wants to gain a tube of euthanasia, and then die without any pain.
And she prefers to waft her soul, rather than hold an exhausted and old body.
Then she become a non-shining star to guard her favorite peace with lonely and
silent in the sky, which she never enjoyed during her whole life,
after that, the coming jeer will destroy her past petty and low.
No one can understands how hopeless when you are sad, maybe only in this way can you really realize the calm at that moment.
This is not all, but a start.
A start to protect the Reminiscence of yours.
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Stardust
If a star is ten million light-years away from me, dazzling or twinkling or falling,
am I infatuated with its bright light？
I can never remember the sign from others under the sky. (I'm not sure what you mean here)
Tired of showing off like a beast, walking like a vulture, circling like a bee.
I have no breath in a vagarious world, and come in contact with cheaters frequently in a lonesome world.
No matter how it was disguised, I cheated myself every time, and told the truth to my sweetheart forever.
What made my kind-hearted girl return to me like an avenger, and prefer to suffer all over, rather than lower her tired head?
What dark night can shroud her fearful heart?
............................. ok, I'm stopping there. Maybe someone else will correct the rest for you.
What let her hurt herself intractably?
She is quietly waiting in a lasting night, while what she waited is tomorrow without seeing sunshine.
The tomorrow would occur again and again;
The tomorrow would become monotonous and tasteless;
The tomorrow would devour wilting and old heart like the trap.
Imagination wounded eyes of darkness night like blinding sunlight,
‘cause she is willing to guard the darkness,
but not wish to see the filthy world by opening her eyes, and even not to see how it devours lamentable soul.
No cheating in this world is a big lie; no lie in this world is a pitch-black prison.
To live proudly by cheating herself, to prove own happiness by gathering
arguments from every corner.
She just wants to gain a tube of euthanasia, and then die without any pain.
And she prefers to waft her soul, rather than hold an exhausted and old body.
Then she become a non-shining star to guard her favorite peace with lonely and
silent in the sky, which she never enjoyed during her whole life,
after that, the coming jeer will destroy her past petty and low.
No one can understands how hopeless when you are sad, maybe only in this way can you really realize the calm at that moment.
This is not all, but a start.
A start to protect the Reminiscence of yours.
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hi you back， Yuki
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May I know where are you from?
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