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How I decided to be an architect Since my earlier childhood I had a crush with houses, and I loved to see those magazine's advertising of apartments and houses. I could imagine I was living in those drawings, walking from room to room... And for an 9 years old it was pretty awesome, to see in a 2 dimensions so many possibilities! And when my parents gave me some Lego bricks... Oh! That was the real start of my projects! But the word "architecture" and its meaning just came to me when I was at the high school. Until them, I thought I wanted to be a civil engineer. For you abroad Brazil, here we have specific functions for architects and civil engineers: the first only designs buildings, houses, object designs, master plans, constructions managements; and the second bridges, highways, industries, structure calculations... When I realized that what I wanted to do was only design of buildings and houses, I was presented to the Architecture world!

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How I decided to be an architect

Since earlY childhood I'VE had a crush with houses, and I loved to see magazine advertisEMENTS of (or FOR) apartments and houses. I could imagine I was living in those drawings, walking from room to room, and for a 9 year old it was pretty awesome to see in a 2-dimensionsAL PICTURE so many possibilities! *And when my parents gave me some Lego bricks... Oh! That was the real start of my projects!


But the word "architecture" and its meaning just came to me when I was IN high school. Until theN, I HAD thought I wanted to be a civil engineer. For (THOSE OF) you NOT FROM Brazil, here we have specific functions for architects and civil engineers: the first only designs buildings, houses, object designs, master plans, AND construction managements; the second bridges, highways, industries, structure calculations...

 

When I realized that what I wanted to do was only design buildings and houses, I was presented to/I discovered the WORLD OF Architecture!

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*Generally you can't start sentences with "and", but for storytelling (which this entry is) it's ok. Same thing with the use of "...". Nice job!

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How Why I decided to be an architect

Since my earlier childhood I had a crush fascination with houses, and I loved to see those magazines advertising of apartments and houses. I could would imagine I was living in those drawings, walking from room to room... And for a an 9-year years old it was pretty awesome, to see in a 2 dimensional view so many possibilities! And when my parents gave me some Lego bricks... Oh! That was the real start of my projects!
But the word "architecture" and its meaning just came to me when I was in at the high school. Until Before then, I thought I wanted to be a civil engineer. For you abroad Brazil, here we have specific functions for architects and civil engineers: the first architects only design buildings, houses, object designs, master plans, constructions managements; and the second civil engineers build bridges, highways, industries, structure calculations... When I realized that what I wanted to do was only design of buildings and houses, I was presented introduced to the world of Architecture world!

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