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With development of economy and international business, people tend to consume goods from different countries easily. In my opinion, we can benefit a lot from this trend.
On the one hand, people can buy a wide range of products. If they are not allowed to shop merchants merchandice made aboard, they only buy their own country’s goods with a limitation of output in the industry and design under their culture. However, they are accessible have access to consume other countries’ products by comparing with the price and quality, which can help them to choose some reasonable and competitive ones. Thanks to this development, companies in this country will attempt to improve their products in quality leading to a fierce competition. Their market will be energetic and flourish under this competition. As a result, consumers can get more choices and some inexpensive items in a high quality.
On the other hand, this development may devastate one country’s economy because they depends heavily on oversees products. Native companies may go bankrupt under the server competition so that millions of staff may lose their jobs and become jobless, which brings a big lot of trouble to the country. The market may be dominated by other countries causing their money to flowing out and reduceing currency reserves. Therefore, the country will fall in have troubles.
In conclusion, people can enjoy different, excellent and tastyed products made by countries all over the world for in a low price and make theirthem lives diversediversity, though they are influenced by other counties. Governments can make some measure to protect native business controlling the quantity of import, which can avoid the dependence onof other countries and enrich people lives.
Great job! Nice transitions and vocabulary! Work on making sure you have the right form of a word and correct preopostions. Keep up the good work!
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