snowscpe of the Summer Palace
Last weekend,beijing snowed.
I and my freind went to watch snowscape in the Summer Palace.
The Summer Palace is very beautiful after snow.We took many photos.
Some people made snowmen.One was a man`s birthday gift for a woman.
It`s so romantic.I was touched.
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Also you should say "My friend and I". It isn't good English to say "Me and my friend". Put yourself last!
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Snowscape at the Summer Palace
Last weekend, it snowed in Beijing. My friend and I went to see the snowscape at the Summer Palace. The Summer Palace is very beautiful after it snows. We took a lot of photos. Some people made snowmen. One was a man's birthday gift for a woman. It was so romantic. I was touched.Be sure to put a space after periods. Also, to remember how to spell words like 'friend' - 'i' before 'e' except after 'c'. It's called Summer Palace... but snow?
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Nice photos! It looks beautiful there!
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