If I were the boy Staring at the colors on my hand, I found everybody’s attention is on me. I realized that I might have done the most terrible thing in my life. I wanted evil take away my consciousne

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Lien Shao-Tung

If I were the boy Staring at the colors on my hand, I found everybody’s attention is on me. I realized that I might have done the most terrible thing in my life. I wanted evil take away my consciousness so that I could hide in my dream. In reality, however, I saw some shocking faces around, and I couldn’t help crying out loud. It happened when my class and I went to the Da Vinci exhibition. I was fascinated by the guide’s vivid commentating. I was so engaged that I didn’t notice anything else. I tripped over by the stair beside the painting. And then things were done. I ‘m so lucky that they don’t charge me for destroying and I’ve become the main character in the world famous incident. In retrospect, It could be the most unforgettable and worthwhile thing in my life.

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If I were the boy

Staring at the colors on my hand, I found (NOTICED) everybody’s attention on me. I realized that I might have JUST done the most terrible thing in my life. I wanted evil TO take away my consciousness so that I could hide in my dream. In reality, however, I saw some shocking faces ALL around, and I couldn’t help (BUT) crying out loud.

It happened when my class and I went to the Da Vinci exhibition. I was fascinated by the guide’s vivid commentating. I was so engaged that I didn’t notice anything else. I tripped over the stair beside the painting. And then things were done.*

I‘m so lucky that they DIDN'T charge me for destroying IT BUT I’ve become the main character in A world famous incident. In retrospect, it could be the most unforgettable and worthwhile thing in my life.

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*Normally you can't start a sentence with and. But here it's for dramatic purposes so it's ok.

This was very fun to read. I cringed so hard when I saw the incident on youtube =(!

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