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A first project about this subject has already been done during the semester four. This previous study has prepared the field for this thesis by analysing and specifying the major needs of the project. Some content of the previous report will be used in this thesis in order to simplify the understanding for the reader and coherence of the document.
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What do you think about this paragraph ?
A first project about this subject was already completed during the fourth semester. This previous study has prepared the field for this thesis by analysing and specifying the major needs of the project. Some content of the previous report will be used in this thesis in order to simplify the understanding for the reader and add coherence of the document.
* You cannot use Present Perfect tense with a specific time (first sentence)
* I am not sure I know what you mean by "the fourth semester" - usually a year has only 2 semesters.
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