It's definately very long so I have only helped part of the whole piece. With academic writing, try to write in a style that a person who is not an expert in your field can understand it. If you can do that, you have gone very far. It take many, many revisions over time to acheive this. Some of my suggestions might be wrong so feel free to ignore my misinterpretations.

ABSTRACT

With the rapid development of Chinnese economy, the forefront reform and opening-up city Shenzhen has added a new crown --- the Chiese pioneer city of greenway construction. In 2010, the pearl river delta region carry out the first greenway construction. Just during the latest five years, Shenzhen is from a lack of slow traffic system quickly developed into a relatively mature greenway city. The greenway has changed most shenzhen residents' daily life. The greenway construction in the early stage, however, still has many problems. This dissertation mainly discusses the greenway construction in Shenzhen.

Shenzhen is a city that has been at the forefront of reform and development in China’s rapidly developing economy. In 2010, the city was the first in China to start building the first greenway construction. In just five years, a slow traffic system has been transformed into a relatively mature greenway city. The greenway has changed the daily lifestyle of most of the residents of Shenzhen. The early stages of greenway construction in Shenzhen has had many problems and these will be discussed in the dissertation.

This dissertation core part is the research conclusion of shenzhen green way, including theory and established greenway cases analysis and summarizing these two parts.

This dissertation is divided into six chapters in the green landscape design research. The first chapter mainly introduces selected background topics, research purpose and meaning, objectives research contents and methods, and structural framework.

The second chapter research topic focuses on related concepts and the definition of the greenway landscape design. Firstly of all, it is from the greenway's origin, concept, type, classification,(classification is mentioned twice) function, evolution and classification in seven six aspects to elaborate the greenway, and pointed out the clarify their understanding of greenway in this dissertation. Secondly, it is about the explains greenway landscape design concept, importance, and content and design procedures. Clarify the meaning of the types of landscape design in this topic. Finally, it makes a statement of describes related greenway landscape design application theory, which provides the necessary theoretical basis for the later chapter case analysis and green landscape design research.