People Who tell líes are bad persons? (essay)

It is thought that people who lie are bad people but, is this really true?. Taking into account the general opinion , many people/persons think that people who (tell ) lies have mean and petty characters but from my point of view I dont think that this is true at all.

On the one hand, it is obvious that no one likes this kind of people for many reasons. For example,on the Web you meet a person and enter into a friendship with her or him, you would not be able to know whether or not that person líes about his or her personality or lifestyle ,and it's hurts and you feel disappointed. Regarding relationships, if a person lies to me about his feelings, I think I could not forgive him because I am sure that I could not trust on his words anymore.

On the other hand, I realize that some people lie out of social pressures. Many people, especially teenagers and young people lie about themselves because they need to live up to the expectations imposed on them by society. Perhaps these people dont feel good with themselves( have low self-esteem) or embarrassed with their current ciricumstances that they have the tendency  to lie to obtain the acceptance from the rest. As far as I'm concearned, people who lie due to these factors are not confident and afraid of rejection.

To sum up, I believe that nobody wants to feel cheated by anyone but in some situations I guess we have to empathize with these people and show them that one of the most important things  is to be yourself in whatever circumstances because it is  more genuine  (the inward 's people?? )

People who tell líes are bad persons? (essay) (person singular, people plural; don't need to repeat it)

It is thought that people anyone who lies is a bad person (mixing people and person - singular nd plural !) but, is this really true?. Taking into account the opinion of those who the people, many persons (repetitive!)  Many think that people who tell lies have a mean and petty spirit, but from my point of view I dont think that this is true at all. (typical long-winded convoluted Spanish sentence!)

On the one hand, it is obvious that no one likes this kind of people for many reasons. (Have you been reading an IELTS book that teaches you to use lots of linking phrases?  they mean nothing!) For example if on the web you meet a person and enter into a friendship with them (singular gender-free pronoun) she or he, you would but do not find out that this person líes about his their personality or his their lifestyle, because it hurts you and you feel disappointed. Regarding relationships - if one person lies/were to lie me about his feelings, I think I cannot/could not forgive him because I am sure that I could not trust on his words anymore. 

have to do it in two parts ...