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Monday Hi everybody! We always say that we hate the monday, because this day means a new week of study or work. But I want to see this day in a positive way. The monday is a more day in our road o route to the "fluent english", this means we are progressing in our lifes. So, I want to say a recognized phrase: Don't worry, be happy! Nice to meet you, and have a nice day! Cheers!

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Monday

Hi everybody!

We always say that we hate the Monday, because it (Monday) means a new week of study or work.

But I want to see/look at this day in a positive way.

 A monday adds one more day in our road/ journey to the English fluency and this means it helps us to progress in English throughout our lives .

So, I want to say /mention a recognizable/cliched phrase: Don't worry, be happy!

Nice to meet you, and have a nice day! Cheers!

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Mondays

Hi Everybody! We always say that we hate Mondays because this day means a new week of study or work. But I want to see this day in a positive way (<---this works but sounds odd. It would possibly sound better one of three ways. (1) I hope to see this day positively. (2) I would like to see this dayin a positive light. (3) I want to see positivity in this day.)) . Mondays are more the beginning to our road or route to the "fluent English". This means we are progressing in our lives. So, I want to say a recognizable phrase: Don't worry, be happy!

Nice to meet you, and have a nice day! Cheers!

 

((Great way of looking at things. I noticed some small things which I corrected and will explain why. Firstly, "Everybody" is capitilized because it is refering to people. I noticed that you used "Monday" often singularly. This would only work if you are referring to one certain Monday. But if you are speaking about "Mondays" in general is has to be plural. One of your sentences I couldn't make it out exactly. So I changed it to what I believed you were trying to express. Here is that sentence : The monday is a more day in our road o route to the "fluent english" Also in English we have some words which are irregular in the plural. "Life" tends to be one of them. Actually, there is a group of words in this family "wife ---wives" "knife----knives" "life----lives". The irregular plural words often give foreigners issues so this is nothing to worry about. But native speakers have problems also with this. My grandmother, for example, says "deers" and "sheeps" which are not correct. "Deer" and "Sheep" do not change in the plural. Lol. Anyways, great job and keep up the work.))

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