Day 2 ~ College Abroad!!!
私は日本に留学を申請しています！私は、ガイダンスカウンセラーのいくつかに話し、彼らは私を持っていることは非常に興奮しています。私に幸運の誰もが願っています。てください、あなたに感謝
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I agree with Orsinia-san. It's better to write your original English sentences. Good luck!
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If you feel anxious about what you wrote in Japanese, I recommend you to write an English version together. It will help you to get more appropriate and prompt corrections/replies, I think. Even with your comment above, I can not guess what 私を持っていること means in the context. And for the last sentence, I suppose you are saying "Please correct my writing, and thank you in advance." If so, 添削をよろしくお願いします。 will be natural. We do not use wording like "thank you in advance."
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Day 2 ~ College Abroad!!!
私は日本への留学を申請しています！私は、ガイダンスカウンセラーの何人かに話し、彼らは私を持っていることに非常に興奮しています。私の幸運を誰もが願っています。
(てください、あなたに感謝)←I can't understand what you mean（ ; ; ）sorry
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-sigh- I meant to say that I hope everyone wishes me well. And it should be I spoke to some of the counselors, not I talk. >.> my grammar is horrible in Japanese
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