Please, correct my home work.
My teacher gave me task writ letter to my imaginary penfriend and answer on his quetions about my opinion about friendship, bein a teenager and marriage.
Dear Tom,
Hi! How are you? How did you spend your Holliday? Tell me all.
Thanks for your letter. You got me very interesting questions about being a teenager, friendships and marriage.
First of all, I will write you about friendships, because I think that friends are the most important part of our life, of course, after family. Friends are people who can understand you, can help you and they will be with you at difficult time. Find a really good friend is difficult and it’s cool if you have the best friend. That’s about me I can’t say that I now have the best friend, but I have just good friends who are all wonderful people and I spent with them the most splendid time of my life.
Now is about teenagers. Being a teenager is interesting and exiting time of life, because we (I’m also teenager) do a lot of things at first time, life opens its doors for us, we get more opportunities in this time. Of course, teenagers can have some problems. We think that no one doesn’t understand us, we don’t know what wait and what we need from life. But I think all problems have solution.
And the last thing is about marriage. Get a marriage is responsible action. In my opinion people can get marriage if they got education, they have a job and they can be responsible for their. It means that they can be responsible for other people, for example, for their children. And, of course, you must really love your the chosen one.
I think I gave answers on your questions.
Write soon,
Love,
Sasha.
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Please, correct my home work.
My teacher gave me a task to write a letter to my imaginary penfriend and answerDear Tom,
Hi! How are you? How did you spend your holiday? Tell me all.
First of all, I will write
Now is about teenagers. Being a teenager is an interesting and exciting time of your life because we (I’m also teenager) do a lot of things
And the last thing is about marriage. Geting
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Write soon,
Love,
Sasha.
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Please, correct my home work.
My teacher gave me task TO writE A letter to my imaginary penfriend and answer on his QUESTIONS ON my opinion about friendship, beinG a teenager and MARRIED.Dear Tom,
Hi! How are you? How did you spend your Holiday? Tell me all.
Thanks for your letter. You got me very interesting questions about being a teenager, friendships and marriage.
First of all, I will write you about friendships, because I think that friends are the most important part of our LIVES, of course, after family. Friends are people who can understand you, can help you and they will be with you at difficult time. TO Find a really good friend is difficult and it’s cool if you have the best friend. That’s about me I can’t say that now I have the best friend, but I have just good friends who are all wonderful people and I spent with them the most splendid time of my life.
Now is about teenagers. Being a teenager is interesting and exiting time of life, because we (I’m also teenager) do a lot of things at first time, life opens its doors for us, we get more opportunities in this time. Of course, teenagers can have some problems. We think that no one doesn’t understand us, we don’t know HOW TO wait and what we need from life. But I think all problems have solution.
And the last thing is about marriage. GETTING MARRIED is responsible action. In my opinion people can get MARRIED if they HAVE got education,have a job and they can be responsible. It means that they can be responsible for other people, for example, for their children and, of course, you must really love your the chosen one.
I think I gave answers on your questions.
Write soon,
Love,
Sasha.
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