New school life

I used to go to a college, and but now I have transferred to an university.
The School will starts in a week, so I am pretty excited, but I've missed my college friends at the same time.
The university I transferred to is 3hrs away from where I used to live... so it may take more time depending on how bad traffic is.
ANW, I am so motivated to study and have fun there! I shouldn't look back. I'll do my best to learn many things at the university!

英語が上手ですね！新しい大学は楽しいといいですね。頑張ってください！I hope you have fun at your new univeristy! Good luck!

New School Life:

I used to go to a different college, but I recently transferred to another university.
School starts in a week so I am pretty excited but at the same time I know I'm going to miss my old college friends.
The university I transferred to is three hours away from where I used to live so my daily commute may be longer now depending on how bad the traffic is. （文法的に正しくて自然な英語に直したけど、意味は分かりにくいです。３時間は前の通学の時間と比べたら過去と現代の比較は分かりやすくなります。そして、どうして通学は長くなりましたか。現代の大学と前の住んでいたところの距離はあまり関係ないです。まだ同じところに住んでいると書いたら分かるけど、その意味は文書に表していません。最後は何で通学するかを読み手に教えたほうがいいと思います。例："three hours away by train and walking"）

I am so motivated to study and have fun there! I won't look back and I'll do my best to learn many things at university!

New school life

I used to go to a college, and I have transferred to a university.
School starts in a week, so I am pretty excited, but I miss my college friends at the same time.
The university I've transferred to is 3hrs away from where I used to live... it may take more time depending on how bad traffic is.
ANW, I am so motivated to study and have fun there! I shouldn't look back. I'll do my best to learn many things at this university!

New school life  experience

I used to go to college, bit now I go to university.
The school will start in a week, so I am pretty excited, but I mess my college friends (colleagues) at the same time.
The university I go to is 3hrs away from where I used to live... it may take more time depending on how bad traffic is.
ANW, I am so motivated to study and to have fun there! I must not look back. I'll do my best to learn many things at the university!  

This is how I would put it. 

You speak good English through. You're really good. ヾ(＠⌒ー⌒＠)ノ 

おめでとうございます

Correct my notebook please

ありがとうございます