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Plz plz any correction
oh whom his love makes me feel proud and makes me feel demeant , how can I come back to you , tell me. you left me confused, enamored and lovesick. I spend days counting stars,while you are being happy in your life .you are the one who makes me swear and swear to me that you don't betray me but you do and you swore that you never lie to me , Where is the commitment and where is your promise !
I will sit on the street and complain, and I will say I am oppressed and you are the one who oppresses me , I will pray to my God for my misfortune to come to you like the misfortune you make for me.
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Plz plz any correction
Oh whom his love makes him(me?) feeling pride and makes me demeaning. How can I come back to you? Tell me. You left me confused, enamored, lovesick. I spend the days in counting the stars while you are happy in your life. You are the one who makes me swear, so swear to me that you won't betray me. But you do, and you swore that never lie to me. Where is the swearing and where is your promise!
I will sit on the street and complain, and I will say I am oppressed. And you are the one who oppresses me, I will pray to my god for misfortune to come to you like the misfortune you made for me.
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