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..still life.. ...just a little note to say how much I loved the movie "Still life". I'm not going to tell you about the story, as I think that you'd better watch it. Anyway, I hope not to disappoint you if I tell you that it speaks about death but, in a certain way, about the beautiness and preciousness of life itself. I apreciated every single scene, the screenplay, the photography, the actors, above all the cleverness and the talent of Eddie Marsan. I'm really gratefull that still exists some movies (and I'd say that this is certainly one of them) able to move me and let me feel not the same at the end...

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..still life..

...just a little note to say how much I loved the movie "Still life". I'm not going to tell you about the story , as I think that you'd better watch it  since it's best you watch it yourself. (Even better: "I'm not going to reveal the story to you since...."). Anyway, I hope not to disappoint you if I tell by telling you that it speaks talks about death but or rather, in a certain way, about the beautiness and preciousness of life itself. I appreciated (you could also use "loved" ..."I loved every single scene...) every single scene, the screenplay, the photography, the actors, and above all the cleverness and the talent of Eddie Marsan. I'm really gratefull that still exists some there still are movies (and I'd say that this is certainly one of them) that are able to move me and let me feel not the same changed at the end...

 

There are many ways certain sentences can be rephrased, so take my corrections as mere suggestions - i.e. one option out of many - of how they might be rewritten to sound better. ;-)

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