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high school planning to organize an after-school activity for its students I would recommend that the school organizes some instrument learning activities since I am obsessed about guitar recently. Because Bob Dylan is a great singer who has really sexy voice and guitar accompaniment that I admire a lot, I want mimic him by learning how to play guitar. Also, it’s a way to attract the opposite sex whoever I am trying to get will be over the moon if I singing some romantic songs with instrument for them. There is no greater aphrodisiac than seeing my boyfriend playing guitar to me.

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High school planning to organize an after-school activity for its students

I would recommend that the school organize some instrument learning activities since I have been obsessed with guitars recently. Because Bob Dylan is a great singer who has really sexy voice and guitar accompaniment that I admire a lot, I want to mimic him by learning how to play guitar. Also, it’s a way to attract the opposite sex. Whoever I am trying to get will be over the moon if I sing some romantic songs with an instrument for them. There is no greater aphrodisiac than seeing my boyfriend playing guitar to me.

 

[Good work.  However, the last thing any adult supervisor of teenage students wants to hear is the word 'aphrodisiac'.  The very mention of it makes some parents faint.  Also, I can't remember any high school student ever needing one, even going back to the beginning of written history. ;-)]

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