my secret friend
I going to talk about a friend, is very serious and calm, it is also very quiet, a lone it sometimes participates in classes, but it is very intelligent and responsible, always give son time tasks and works, it is very punctual when entering to classes with all it is very patient and kind.
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You are using the word "it". In English you need He or She. I can't tell which gender your friend is, so I will use "She".
My Secret Friend.
I am going to tell you about my friend. She is very serious and calm. She is also very quiet. She sometimes participates in class. She is very intelligent and responsible. She always gives son (do you mean the word "some"?) timed tasks and exercises (if you are talking about class activites). She is very punctual. She is very patient and kind.
You used the word "very" very often. :-) I would take 2-3 of those out. Good luck with your writing!
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