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Alimentary Supplements With good diet habits and healthy life habits, there is no need of alimentary supplements to any nutrient, according to several specialists in the medical area. Because of that, the consumption of alimentary supplements may have risks (a lot of that) in face of the benefits (few). Lucile T. Abe-Matsumoto, from the Foodt The excess of marketing with supplements are rising attention from CONAR (organization which control Brazilian publicity) with suspension of some marketing campaigns.

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Alimentary Supplements

With good dietary and lifestyle habits (this is more natural) diet habits and healthy life habits, there is no need to add of  alimentary supplements to any nutrient, This has been stated by according to several specialists in the medical area.

Because of this that the consumption of alimentary supplements may result in more negative effects thans positive. have risks (a lot of that) in face of the benefits (few).

Lucile T. Abe-Matsumoto, from the Foodt

The excess of supplement marketing campaigns marketing with supplements are now rising attention from CONAR (organization which control Brazilian publicity) with the suspension of some marketing campaigns.

 

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