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Hungary flagEmese 艾米
Surveillance technologies Nowadays nothing is hidden. Sombody knows everything about you - what you buy, where you are, who you call last night. We're being recorded by using our credit or cash cards. CCTV cameras are keep track of us everywhere. However since peolpe are aware of that they're watched they're less likely to commit a crime such as mugging or shoplifting. Some decades later our body will be our ID. WE will be identified more quickly by finger scanning, face recognition or voice recognition. And also locating is becoming a lot easier with GPS. A lot of rental and mobile phone companies are already using this technology. Years later you won’t have to carry a bunch of cards, but a single idetification card, which will contain a microhip so it will be able to store a lot more information. With these technologies our lives can be a lot faster and easier. But as most of the things it’s also has disavantages. The biggest question is how our rights will be preserved. Though the public safey is increasing and we have more convenince, we have no privacy anymore. Then is that worth it?

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Surveillance technologies

 

Nowadays nothing is hidden. Sombody knows everything about you - what you buy, where you are, who you called last night. We're being recorded when we use our credit or cash cards.
CCTV cameras are keep track of us everywhere. However since people are aware that they are being watched they're less likely to commit a crime such as mugging or shoplifting.


Some decades later our body will be our ID. We will be identified more quickly by finger scanning, face recognition or voice recognition. Locating people is becoming a lot easier with GPS. A lot of rental and mobile phone companies are already using this technology. In years to come you won’t have to carry a big collection of cards, but a single identification card, which will contain a microchip so it will be able to store a lot more information. With these technologies our lives will be a lot faster and easier.

 

But as with most things it also has disadvantages. The biggest question is how our rights will be preserved. Though public safety is increasing and we have more convenience, we will have no privacy anymore. Is that worth it?

 

Hello Emese,

I'm not sure exactly who you are writing this for but generally this would appear to be an essay. In this case you should not use contractions or informal language (bunch). I also think that there should be a concluding paragraph giving your opinion but this depends on your original question.

 

Hope this helps

 

Bob

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