essay

This essay will attempt to analyze some of the main issues in the possibility of leaving the European Union as a solution for Spanish problems.
It is undoubtedly true that Spain is suffering from unemployment and poverty. Not very much seems to have been done by the government to overcome the crisis. First of all, I would like to point out that there are lots of people looking for a job, mostly young people. Meantime they have to live in poverty. It is by no means uncommon to hear that people were happier and richer when we weren't part of the European Union. Spanish people loved the former currency the peseta.
On the other hand, I think the European Union is not guilty of to blame for our situation. I think you should judge each person on their own behaviour. The European Union tries to help us. After all, as far as we know, some efforts were made by the new government to solve the problems. It is easy to blame the others for our mistakes
Furthermore, I cannot say that all people are the same because many people are reluctant to abandon the European Union. To this point, I would like that the economic crisis comes to an end soon (or I would like the economic crisis to come to an end soon). I would argue strongly that creating jobs and reviving the market are two key points to overcome the situation. The longer the problem goes on the worse it is likely to get so we need to find solutions. I think politicians should work harder. They can do it.

Extremely well written Lorena. Just a couple of small corrections are in red and some suggestions to sound more natural in blue/grey.