First notebook entry: Introducing myself I was born in shanghai on june 7th.As you all know ,shanghai is an international metropolis，so when i was young ,i had been exposed to english which is most wi

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I was born in shanghai on june 7th.As you all know ,shanghai is an international metropolis，so when i was young ,i had been exposed to english which is most widely used all over the world.As result,english especially oral english attracts me a lot,and i hope that i will be able to communicate fluently with your natives speaking english as your mother tongue.Then it will be easy for me to learn your culture and make more friends from many other countries,thats the reason why i learn english. Now,i am an undergraduate majoring in law and policy,my english teacher recommend this website to me,He said ,by using this website ,i can improve me standard of english and most attractive thing is that you can learn the skills as well as have fun at the same time.i hope so,i hope we can be talkfriend first ,then real friends. My hobby is palying tennis and singing.i am not good at singing,but i enjoy myself when i do it.Tennis is my favor sport,if iyou like it too,and have chance to visit china、come to shanghai,maybe we can have a game. i am lokking foward to make friends with you,and its nice for to be my english teacher~~haha waiting for you~~~

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I was born in Shanghai on June 7th. As you all know, Shanghai is an international metropolis, so when I was young, I had been exposed to English which is most widely used all over the world. As a result, English, especially oral English, attracts me a lot. //这个句该拆分// I hope that I will be able to communicate fluently with native English speakers. Then it will be easy for me to learn your culture and make more friends from many other countries. That's the reason ~~why~~ I learn english. //这个句也该拆分。替代品是 (, and so I want to learn English. )//
Now, I am an undergraduate majoring in law and policy, and my english teacher recommend this website to me. He said that by using this website I can improve my standard of English, and the most attractive thing is that you can learn the skills as well as have fun at the same time. I hope this is the case, I hope we can chat first , then become real friends.

My hobbies are palying tennis and singing. I am not good at singing, but i enjoy myself anyway. //when I do it 可以料想，不得写// Tennis is my favorite sport, so if iyou like it too, and have chance to visit China, come to Shanghai and maybe we can have a game.

I am looking foward to making friends with you, and it's nice for you to be my English teacher~~ haha

Waiting for you~~~

Remember that when typing on a computer to add a space ( ) after a period (.) or comma (,).

Names of countries or cities (China, Shanghai),
languages (English, Mandarin),
months (June),
days of the week (Monday),
the first letter in a new sentence (...something. However... )
and the word "I"
alreays have a capital letter (EX: ~~china~~ China)

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I was born in shanghai on june 7th.As you all know ,shanghai is an international metropolis，so when i was young ,i had been exposed to english ,which is most widely used all over the world.As a result,English especially oral english attracts me a lot,and i hope that i will be able to communicate fluently with your natives speaking english as your mother tongue(native speakers of English).Then it will be easy for me to learn your(confused personal pronoun) culture and make more friends from many other countries,thats the reason why i learn english.

Now,i am an undergraduate majoring in law and policy,my english teacher recommend this website to me,He said ,by using this website ,i can improve me standard of english and the most attractive thing is that ~~you~~ we can learn the skills as well as have fun at the same time.i hope so,i hope we can be talkfriend (lol,is this word created by you?lol,at least you should use plural forms )first ,then real friends.

My hobby is palying tennis and singing.i am not good at singing,but i enjoy myself when i do it.Tennis is my favorite sport,if iyou like it too,and have chance to visit china、come to shanghai,maybe we can have a game.

i am looking foward to making friends with you,and it's nice for you to be my english teacher~~haha

waiting for you~~~

btw:it is better to use capital letters for beginning of some words. such as "English"

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