Trips

WRITING

Today, I would like to talk about trips. In the first place, I think that travelling is the best way to learn about different cultures or people in the world. You can learn much when you go out of your country and I think that is very important.

In the second place, I have to say I like travelling because you can be a citizen with an open mind and I love that concept because it´s fantastic when you learn with other people and you can have a wider knowledge of the world.

At the beginning, I started travelling with my friends all over my country (Spain), so I travelled by bus and by train. After that, I started to travel alone and when I met my wife we travelled to other countries in Europe, like Portugal, Germany, France, England, Austria, Italy, Belgium and Holland. I have also been to Morocco.

On our honeymoon, we were in the USA, in New York and Florida and it was an amazing experience because we could visit many countries.
In addition, I have to say that I have done backpacking trips and it was a wonderful experience because you can learn a lot of things when you travel that way.
That is alll for today.
Regards!

Hello Jose,

An interesting account of your travels and I can understand nearly everything. The only point which wasn't very clear was in the 3rd paragraph. I have rewritten part of it and I hope that I haven't changed your meaning.  You are so lucky to have visited so many places.

Bob

Trips

WRITING
Today, I would like to talk about trips. First, I think that travelling is the best way to learn about differents cultures or people in the world. You can learn a lot when you go out of your country and I think that that is very important.
Secondly, I have to say I like travelling because you can be a citizen with an open minding and I love that concept because it´s fantastic when you can learn with other people and you can have a knowledge about a world that is much wider.
At the beginning, I started travelling with my friends all over the my country (Spain), so I travelled by bus and by train. After that, I started to travel alone and with my wife and that was when I travelled to other countries in Europe, like Portugal, Germany, France, England, Austria, Italy, Belgium and Holland. I have also been in Morocco.
During our honey moon, we were in the USA, in New York and Florida and it was an amazing experience because we were able to visit many countries.
In addition, I have to say that I have done many backpacking trips and they were wonderful experiences because you can learn a lot of things when you travels in that manner.
That is alll for today.
Regards!

¡Buen trabajo! Solamente fueron unos pocos errores que necesité corregir, pero su inglés es muy bueno. Por favor, ¡siga mejorándolo y pronto va a poder a hablar como un nativo!