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A broken windows
Last week while I was reading a book, I heard a strong noise so that I went to the place where the noise had occurred. When I arrived to the place there I was surprised to see a broken window. At first I was scared because I thought that a thief broke into my house but more later I discovered that there was no thief. The neighbour’s son had been playing in front of my house and he had thrown a stone at my window. Today I haven’t still don´t have a new windows because my neighbours say they have no money and I am very angry because I will have to for pay the window.
Well written with a few minor errors.
In English we have a phrase that applies to this type of unfortunate situation. ¨That sucks¨
A broken window
Last week while I was reading a book, I heard a loud noise, so I went to the place where the noise had occurred. When I arrived, I was surprised to see a broken window. At first I was scared because I thought that a thief had broken into my house, but later I discovered that there was no thief. The neighbor’s son had been playing in front of my house, and he had thrown a stone at my window. Today I still don't have a new window because my neighbors say they have no money, and I am very angry because I will have to pay for the window.
Note: In The United Kingdom, "neighbour" is fine. In The United States, we spell it without the "u."
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