A long day
Today, I was very tired. I was at school all day. The weather was very hot while I have to concentrate on the lessons. After school, I lingered a bit to talk to my friend, she had some trouble with her roommate. I listened and gave some advice for her. I waited for a bus but it was too crowded, so I decided to walk home. It helps me relax and more comfortable . Now I'm hungry and I want to go to bed.
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A long day
Today, I was very tired. I was at school all day. The weather was very hot while I had to concentrate on the lessons. After school, I lingered a bit to talk to my friend, she had some trouble with her roommate. I listened and gave her some advice. I waited for a bus but it was too crowded, so I decided to walk home. It helped me relax and feel more comfortable. Now I'm hungry and I want to go to bed.
If I have to choose between walking or the bus, I almost always walk, I hate crowded buses!
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