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Tesla, Obama and the environment
Hello guys, I have just written an essay about the environment. I hope you will enjoy it with this, I can asure you because I think this is really interesting.
Please, if you observe spot some any mistake, I ask you that, please, write a correction do correct it. Thanks a lot of. for your help.
Recently, we are listening a lot of people there has been much debate in the media around the fact who is trying to show that we are not doing anything to avoid the destruction of our planet as a result of consequence of the harmful overexploitation of the environment. (the sentence is a bit too long in English. Another alternative could be: Our inability to cope with the destruction of the environment is due to overexploitation of our natural resources and has lately been the subject of much debate in the media.)
I would like to remark refer to the last statements of Jeremy Paxtman, who was talking the past last week in a BBC TV program from the BBC. According to him with his words, is true that the industry is today generating today a lot of greenhouse gasses, chemical wastes, high levels of carbon dioxide – so enough that more than what our nature can not absorber / recycle - and other toxic liquids and rubbish which are causing the global warming and the future destruction of the human life. But not only the industry is not the only responsible, people also contribute too with to this problem. We prefer to use gas and travel by car or by plane or our gas boiler instead of to using other renewable energy sources, and therefore, we are responsible of for the high rates of pollution and the smog on our planet.
However, we must explain too it is also worth mentioning that today there are a lot of people who are extremely worried with about the global warming and they are trying to change the law and make introduce specifics regulation to protect our environment. For example, the President from of the USA, Barack Obama, has just announced a new regulation which will be change the carbon industry in the next decades. In At the same time, The European Union is discussing about the importance of new sources of energy, and other actors agent are is worry too also worried about this problem. For example the Company Tesla is manufacturing cars, a car manufacturer, has developed ? (not quite clear what you want to say here) an new public transport system which is very similar with to the traditional railway service train, and other new machines capable to fly of flying in which, a simple panel solar or electricity battery is the unique source of energy.
Finally, I think that in the future people and governments will keep on worrying about the environment and, the most importantly importance it has for the public opinion, the more efficient the industry will be, and the more sustainable / energy-efficient machines companies will make new machines which will not harm the environment. Our planet and all of us will continue to live.
Great text - well done!
Tesla, Obama and the environment
Hello guys, I have just written an essay about the environment. I hope you will enjoy it with this, I can asure you because I think this is really interesting.
Please, if you observe spot some any mistake, I ask you that, please, write a correction do correct it. Thanks a lot of. for your help.
Recently, we are listening a lot of people there has been much debate in the media around the fact who is trying to show that we are not doing anything to avoid the destruction of our planet as a result of consequence of the harmful overexploitation of the environment. (the sentence is a bit too long in English. Another alternative could be: Our inability to cope with the destruction of the environment is due to overexploitation of our natural resources and has lately been the subject of much debate in the media.)
I would like to remark refer to the last statements of Jeremy Paxtman, who was talking the past last week in a BBC TV program from the BBC. According to him with his words, is true that the industry is today generating today a lot of greenhouse gasses, chemical wastes, high levels of carbon dioxide – so enough that more than what our nature can not absorber / recycle - and other toxic liquids and rubbish which are causing the global warming and the future destruction of the human life. But not only the industry is not the only responsible, people also contribute too with to this problem. We prefer to use gas and travel by car or by plane or our gas boiler instead of to using other renewable energy sources, and therefore, we are responsible of for the high rates of pollution and the smog on our planet.
However, we must explain too it is also worth mentioning that today there are a lot of people who are extremely worried with about the global warming and they are trying to change the law and make introduce specifics regulation to protect our environment. For example, the President from of the USA, Barack Obama, has just announced a new regulation which will be change the carbon industry in the next decades. In At the same time, The European Union is discussing about the importance of new sources of energy, and other actors agent are is worry too also worried about this problem. For example the Company Tesla is manufacturing cars, a car manufacturer, has developed ? (not quite clear what you want to say here) an new public transport system which is very similar with to the traditional railway service train, and other new machines capable to fly of flying in which, a simple panel solar or electricity battery is the unique source of energy.
Finally, I think that in the future people and governments will keep on worrying about the environment and, the most importantly importance it has for the public opinion, the most efficient the industry will be, and the more sustainable / energy-efficient machines companies will make new machines which will not harm the environment. Our planet and all of us will continue to live.
Great text - well done!
Tesla, Obama and the environment
Hello guys, I have just written an essay about environment. I hope you enjoy with this, I can assure you this is really interesting.
Please, if you observe some mistake, I ask you that you please write a correction. Thanks alot. a lot of.
Recently, we are listening to a lot of people in the media who is are trying to show that we are not doing anything to avoid the destruction of our planet as a consequence of harming the harmful of the environment.
I would like to remark comment on the last statements of Jeremy Paxtman, who was talking this past week in a tv program from the BBC. According with to him his words, it is true that Industry is today generating a lot of greenhouse gasses, chemical wastes, high levels of carbon dioxide – so enough much that our nature can not absorb- and other toxic liquids and rubbish which are causing the global warming and the future destruction of the human life. But Industry is not the only cause (or: reason) responsible, people contribute too with this problem. We prefer to use our car, plane or our gas boiler instead to use of using other renewable energy sources, and for that, we are responsible of for the high rates of pollution and smog in our planet.
However, we must explain too that today there are a lot of people who are extremely worried with the about global warming and they are trying to change the law and make specifics regulations to protect our environment. For example, the President from USA, Barack Obama, has just announced a new regulation which will be change the carbon industry in the next decades. In the same time, The European Union is discussing about (or: talking about) the importance of new sources of energy, and other agencies is also worry too about this problem, for example the Company Tesla is manufacturing cars, an there is a new public transport system which is very similar with the traditional train, and other new machines capable to fly of flying in which, a simple panel solar (solar panel) or electricity battery is the unique source of energy.
Finally, I think that in the future people and government will keep on worrying about environment and, the more important it is has for the public opinion, the most efficient the industry will be, and companies will make new machines which will not harm the environment. Our planet, and all of us, will live.
Tesla, Obama and the environment
Hello gUys, I have just written an essay about environment. I hope you enjoy with this, I can asure you this is really interesting.
Please, if you observe some mistake, I ask you that, please, write a correction. Thank a lot of.
Recently, we are listening a lot of people in the media who is trying to show that we are not doing anything to avoid the destruction of our planet as consequence of the harmful of the environment.
I would like to remark the last statements of Jeremy Paxtman, who was talking the past week in a tv program from the BBC. According with his words, is true that Industry is today generating a lot of greenhouse gasses, chemical wastes, high levels of carbon dioxide – so enough that our nature can not absorber- and other toxic liquids and rubbish which are causing the global warming and the future destruction of the human life. But Industry is not the only responsible, people contribute too with this problem. We prefer to use our car, plane or our gas boiler instead to use other renewable energy source, and for that, we are responsible of the high rates of pollution and smog in our planet.
However, we must explain too that today there are a lot of people who are extremely worried with the global warming and they are trying to change the low and make specifics regulation to protect our environment. For example, the President from USA, Barack Obama, has just announced a new regulation which will be change the carbon industry in the next decades. In the same time, The European Union is discussing about the importance of new sources of energy, and other agent is worry too about this problem, for example the Company Tesla is manufacturing cars, an new public transport system which is very similar with the traditional train, and other new machines capable to fly in which, a simple panel solar or electricity battery is the unique source of energy.
Finally, I think that in the future people and government will keep on worrying about environment and, the most importance it has for the public opinion, the most efficient the industry will be, and companies will make new machines which will not harm the environment. Our planet and all of us will live.
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