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Water is Life (3)
Chapter 3
Water’s Hexagon Structure, from of Dr Masaru Emoto's Book? Investigation (Messages From Water, Water Crystals In Motion).
Do to previous tests, Dr Mawaru noticed that water is sensitive to words... these investigations give us too many things to think about.
Well, if these this words change water's its molecular structure, what can do the words do to in our bodies, or our lives? <Our=plural
Does it these experiments mean that my thoughts and my words change me?
I think it is because our bodies we are constituted for 65% of water in our adult life. Children have more than 75% of water in their bodies.
It means we are our thoughts.
So, what happens when a father says to his child: "You are good for nothing! Why don't you ever do anything good right! You can not do something... You are a ....(bad words). Stupid.... it is impossible, you can't, I hate...
What do you think will be happen to whit this child?
How does our society behave?
How do our family behave?
Are we able to deal with our fears?
Our society is full of diseases, hate, war... but we have our destiny is in our hands. We can change, we can get rid of remove all of this negativity these events.
If you are an adult, it means that you are responsible for of your actions. So we have to do something to for break the chains of hatred and fear.
If you are a father, do not say you can not.... you are a ...(bad works) to at your son.
If you have a wife, father, mother, friend etc, tell them how much many love do you have for them.
If you love yourself, do not let yourself to have dark thoughts because we are our thoughts. Some times we are our worst enemies.
The End.
by Humberto C.
Very good job, Humberto. Pay attention to punctuation and the difference between plural and singular and your writing will move to the next level.
--Ravi.
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