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Water is life (3) Chapter 3 Water’s Hexagon Structure, of Dr Masaru Emoto's investigation (Messages From Water, Water Crystals In Motion). With previous tests, Dr Mawaru checked that water is sensitive to words... these investigations give us to many things to think about. Well. If this words change its molecular structure... what can do the words in our body, or our live? These experiments mean, that my thoughts and my words change me? I think it is... because we are constituted for 65% of water in our adult life. Children has more than 75% of water in their bodies. It mean, we are our thoughts... So. What happen when a father say?: You are good for nothing! Why you never do anything good! You can not do something... you are a ....(bad words) stupid.... it is imposible, you can't, hate... What do you think will be happen whit this children? How our society behaves? How our family behaves? Are we able to deal our fears? Our society is full of diseases, hate, war... but we have our destination in our hands. We can change, we can remove all of these events. If you are adult, it means that you are responsable of your actions. So we have to do something for break the chains of hatred and fear. If you are father, do not say... you can not.... you are a ...(bad works) at your son. If you have wife, father, mother, friends etc... tell them, how many love do you have for they. If you love yourself, do not let yourself to have dark thoughts, because we are our thoughts. Some times we are our worst enemy. the end. by Humberto C.

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Water is Life (3)

Chapter 3
Water’s Hexagon Structure, from of Dr Masaru Emoto's Book? Investigation (Messages From Water, Water Crystals In Motion).


Do to previous tests, Dr Mawaru noticed that water is sensitive to words... these investigations give us too many things to think about.

Well, if these this words change water's its molecular structure, what can do the words do to in our bodies, or our lives? <Our=plural
Does it these experiments  mean that my thoughts and my words change me?
I think it is because our bodies we are constituted for 65% of water in our adult life. Children have more than 75% of water in their bodies.
It means we are our thoughts.
So, what happens when a father says to his child: "You are good for nothing! Why don't you ever do anything good right! You can not do something... You are a ....(bad words). Stupid.... it is impossible, you can't, I hate...
What do you think will be happen to whit this child?
How does our society behave?
How do our family behave?
Are we able to deal with our fears?
Our society is full of diseases, hate, war... but we have our destiny is in our hands. We can change, we can get rid of remove all of this negativity these events.
If you are an adult, it means that you are responsible for of your actions. So we have to do something to for break the chains of hatred and fear.
If you are a father, do not say you can not.... you are a ...(bad works) to at your son.
If you have a wife, father, mother, friend etc, tell them how much many love do you have for them.
If you love yourself, do not let yourself to have dark thoughts because we are our thoughts. Some times we are our worst enemies.

The End.
by Humberto C.

 

 

Very good job, Humberto. Pay attention to punctuation and the difference between plural and singular and your writing will move to the next level.

 

--Ravi.

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