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Greeting Hello еveryone! This is my first entry in notebook. My name is Violetta. I live in Russia. I'm wear glasses, as my vision is -3. Haha, this is very sad. I can to tell also, I have dog. Her name is Lana. Bye. Kiss. Violetta :)

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Greeting

Hello еveryone! This is my first entry in notebook. My name is Violetta. I live in Russia. I wear glasses as my vision is -3. Haha, this is very sad. I can also tell you that I have dog and her name is Lana.

Bye. Kiss.
Violetta :)

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Greetings

Hello еveryone! This is my first entry in notebook. My name is Violetta. I live in Russia. I'm wear glasses, as my vision is -3. Haha, this is very sad. I can also to tell also you that, I have dog. Her name is Lana.

Bye. Kiss.
Violetta :)

 

Welcome to italki Violetta!

My first suggestion is to not write "text speak" - as you might on a phone or a chatroom.

(Where grammar is often ignored because of abbreviations etc.,)

Here is a compact variation of what you wrote:

"My name is Violetta, I live in Russia, I wear glasses and I have a dog called Lana. This is my first notebook entry."

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