Happy birthday to me~~

Today is a sunny and warm day. The clean blue sky and white clouds make me feel pleased. Also,Today is also a special day---- because it's my birthday! Although my parents aren't at home, my grandma and me I are still enjoying ourselves, and the cake is very delicious.
Sometimes we can't make everything perfect, but we can be active.

... enn,My English isn't good, so please point out my mistakes for me. Thanks!

Happy birthday to me~~

Today is a sunny and warm day. The clean blue sky and white clouds make me feel pleased. Also, today is a special day----my birthday! Although my parents aren't at home, my grandma and I are still enjoying ourselves. And the cake is very delicious.
Sometimes we can't make everything perfect, but we can try.

"pleased" isn't used very often in this way. A better word would probably be "happy" or "content".

Also, sentences aren't supposed to start with "and" but it's alright for informal situations like this.

Everything was pretty easy to understand! Happy Birthday :)