correct me please,and if you can give me some notes,it can well be cool.

Stip step by stip step,we can get ahead.
In my life,espasially especially in my study, I meet tow two kinds of people,the first kind is the intelligant intelligent people, who understunded understand quickly and can take good notes in the exam.But, the second kind those who were not very intelligant intelligent, but they have a willpower and great desire in order to be a successful person (a great desire to succeed), that is why, I want to talk about my best friend in my life, his name is Yahya.So, he was not very intelligant intelligent  he was like us, the are there was no difference.But,in the reality, it has there was a big difference, which is the power and the desire (to succeed) that he has, he hated his self himself when he saw some girls who were best better than him, because they take good notes in the exam.But, for me, and for others too,it was a normal thing, and when I saw him anxious about her, I said Yahya is not a boy,he make me laugh (i didnt understand this part well) because I thought just girls who cry when they saw some others who got good notes (better) than hers.But, after tow two years in the preparatary classes, i dicovered discovered that we can not be good if we don’t have something in ourselves who that give(s) us the motivation.of course, I’m sure i can not be the best one, but i can be better.I discovered too that nothing comes easily, because my friend Yahya,he has worked hard,that is why, he achieve (acheived) his goals.